Today i had a class critique and the feedback were positive and constructive. The artist's that i got given to look at were Fiona Jack and Tracey Moffat.
Fiona Jack
For Nothing
I really like her artwork when it comes to scale and position where she put her artwork all around auckland city for her final year when she studied at AUT.
Tracey Moffat
I really like this idea and concept that Tracey Moffat has for her artwork. How she captions her images that she has taken and the expressions of the subjects.
Something that i am interested in putting into my own work. Having to add captions to my images will be useful to be put in at the end of the illustrations.
What Worked?
The captions to the images work for me because it helps me to understand the image more.
What Didn't?
Having captions in the images limits the viewer with their thoughts and ideas of what they think about the images.
What Next?
When i do the next photoshoot to my car series il add in some captions to define the situation in my illustration.






























